Someone left a helpful feedback comment pointing out the fact that the story begins "You should! You should!" and then suddenly we read "must," and "ought" out of the blue, and that they felt it may be a little inconsistent. I personally don't think this is a big problem, but it has caused me to wonder if the story could benefit by a change in the title.
So what do you think? What if this story was titled,
"You Should Must Ought"
"You Should You Must You Ought"
"Should Must Ought"
"You Should You Should"
By Ginny Tilby ...I still get a kick out of seeing my name there :)